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对称结构C (对应题型: 双重观点讨论类Topic－改良模式)

第一段 (开头段/Introduction):

① Lead-in Sentence (Optional)

② Public Opinion 1

③ Public Opinion 2

第二段 （分析甲方观点）

① 过渡句 (Topic Sentence)

② 甲方观点合理性 (或然性条件)

③+④：甲方观点漏洞 (必然性条件)

第三段 (分析乙方观点)

① 过渡句 (Topic Sentence)

② 乙方观点合理性 (或然性条件)

③+④: 乙方观点漏洞 (必然性条件)

第四段 (结尾段)

① 主体定性/Summarize the nature of the subject

② 推导出改良观点/State your own opinion

Some people think that it is the responsibility of government to ensure that people have healthy lifestyle by taking compulsory measures. Others think people should be given the full freedom to make their lifestyle decisions. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion. (2008.3.29)

② Some people hold that government should hold the full responsibility to make sure that people lead their lives in a healthy way. ③ Others, however, argue that it is only the people themselves that can decide which lifestyle they pursue.

① On one hand, the proposal sounds reasonable to a certain extent. ② If government does take certain compulsory measures, for instance, banning all pubs and internet cafes in cities, it is possible that a number of people, especially teenagers who stay up late for parties or PC games, will have to discard their obsession and revert to a normal lifestyle. ③ Nevertheless, it has to be pointed out that although the practice seems to be sounding, it is unlikely to solve the problem thoroughly. ④ For example, even if all the pubs and internet cafes are officially banned, chances are that those young people will still indulge themselves in unhealthy lifestyles playing PC games or throwing parties till midnight at home.

① On the other hand, those who call for the freedom to choose their own lifestyles also have a point. ② Indeed, it would be a sign indicating that people’s freedom are fully recognized and respected if a government leaves the decision to people themselves. ③ However, it should not be ignored that some young people who do lack self-control are possibly to be fully obsessed with self-indulgent lifestyles if the government virtually does nothing about it. ④ Such excessive freedom would turn out to be nothing but a curse.

① From the above analysis, it could be noted that either viewpoint has obvious problems. ② In my opinion, the government needs to play a role in guiding people to live in a healthy way but it is never possible for the government to literally “ensure” that by taking compulsory measures. (292 words)