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① To sum up, it does bring benefits to the government if more women participate in certain fields of governmental positions. ② Such benefits, nevertheless, are based on the sacrifice of the women’s family lives and the interests of their male counterparts. ③ So I think it is acceptable for the government to encourage women to commit themselves to some high level jobs, but on no account should we reserve them for women purposely. (306 words)

对称结构B (对应题型: 双重观点讨论类Topic－二选一模式)

第一段 (开头段/Introduction):

① Public Opinion 1

② Public Opinion 2

③ Statement

第二段 （分析反对观点）

① 过渡句 (Topic Sentence)

② 反方观点合理性 (或然性条件)

③+④：反对观点漏洞 (必然性条件)

第三段 (分析支持观点)

① 过渡句 (Topic Sentence)

② 支持观点局限性(或然性条件)

③+④: 支持观点合理性 (必然性条件)

第四段 (结尾段)

① 主体定性/Summarize the nature of the subject

② 推导出观点/State your opinion

Some people believe that developing countries should concentrate on improving industrial skills. Some people argue that developing countries should promote education first. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion. *At present, quite a number of developing countries always find themselves caught in a dilemma that whether they should regard the development of industrial skills or the promotion of education as their priority. ③ While it seems that both options have their reasons, I am in favor of the latter one personally.

① Apparently, those who advocate the development of industrial skills do have their reasons to a certain extent. ② They believe that compared with promoting education, laying stress on industry brings immediate economic return for developing countries more directly. ③ The improvement of industrial skills, nevertheless, is simply of short-term interests. ④ Without sufficient talents, how long such economic prosperity could last is quite questionable.

① While we have to admit that there is some element of truth in the above argument, the latter opinion, nevertheless, is more convincing to me. ② Indeed, education costs a lot instead of bringing immediate economic return. ③ The point should not be overlooked is that only by the promotion of education can we ensure the progress of the national strength in the long run. ④ A country that fully concentrates on the improvement of industrial skills, due to the lack of effective education, is likely to suffer from a huge lack of talents who have the ability to propel the society further forward.

① From the above analyses, we can see that only by the progress of education can we lay a solid foundation for the long-term development for a developing country. ② For this reason, I believe that it is wiser to develop education first instead of industrial skills. (258 words)