2011年广东高考英语作文指导(4)

作文

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Making His Mark

A man from the state of Chu was taking a boat across a river when he dropped his sword into the water carelessly. Immediately he made a mark on the side of the boat where the sword dropped, hoping to find it later. When the boat stopped moving, he went into the water to search for his sword at the place where he had marked the boat. As we know, the boat had moved but the sword had not. Isn’t this a very foolish way to look for a sword?

4. 基础写作（“我与奥运”活动）

假如你在春节期间到北京大学参加了一个为期十天的冬令营活动。以下是你参加本次活动期间所写的部分日记摘要。

[写作内容]

你拟向某英文杂志―我与奥运‖栏目投稿，请根据日记内容写一篇短文

介绍本次活动的内容及你的感受。你的稿件需包括以下五方面的内容：

1.本次活动的概况（名称、时间、地点）；

2.介绍校内活动的内容；

3.介绍校外活动的内容；

4.概述你对本次活动的总体感受；

5.你对本次活动的建议并阐述原因。

[写作要求]

1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

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During the spring festival, I attended a ten-day winter camp in Beijing University. We took part in many different activities, including a lecture on Olympic Games History and an English language course. We also visited a new sports