2011年广东高考英语作文指导(13)

时间：2025-04-20

作文

3．开头和结尾已为你写好（不算入要求的5句话里）。

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thanks for your attention. I’m writing to complain about your product.

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I am looking forward to your early reply.

Li Hua

【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

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One possible version：

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thanks for your attention. I’m here writing to complain about your product.

Last month, I bought an MP3 made by your company, which brought me enjoyment for some time. But last week, something went wrong with the screen and I can’t see anything on it. I have talked about this with the shop which sold me this MP3, but they/it couldn’t do anything about it. Having no choice, I turn to you for help. I hope you can get me a new one or return my money to me.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Li Hua

17. 基础写作 (介绍你英语写作的方法和心得)

[写作内容] 你的英语老师要求你在班上用英文向同学们介绍你英语写作的

[写作要求] 1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 开头与结尾已经给出。

[评分标准] 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

Ladies and gentlemen,

Now I would like to tell you how I learn English writing.

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That’s all. Thank you.