2011年广东高考英语作文指导(2)

作文

【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

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Last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on ―Who Is Your Idol‖. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols, while 48% of the boys prefer sports stars. As the data shows, ―parents‖ rank the second for the girls, but the forth for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing ―great figures‖ is the same as that of the girls. As for me, Thomas Edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life.

2. 基础写作(介绍奥运中的射击项目)

[写作内容] 你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项

[写作要求] 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容

[评分标准] 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

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【基础写作范文1选登】

Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and the 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympics in shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.

【基础写作范文2选登】

It was not until at the end of 19th century that shooting, originated as a means of survival, earned its status as a sport. Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896. Yet, twice in history (1904, 1928) shooting was suspended at the Olympics. It returned to the Games in 1932, and women were first allowed to participate in the competition in 1968. The sport has been growing steadily from 1896’s three events to today’s seventeen.

【基础写作范文3赏析】 Shooting was originally a tool of people’s survival, which developed into a sports event at the end of nineteenth century (定语从句). In 1896, it became one of the Olympic events for the first time(简单句). In 1904 and 1928 Olympics, it was stopped, after which it returned in 1932(定语从句). It was in 1968 that women were allowed to join in the shooting competition for the first time (强调句) . From then on, the event is developing steadily and