中考作文主题训练18——快乐之源(3)

时间:2025-03-10

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3.最后一段中,作者运用了only in the way can we keep ourselves happy。表明诚实是保持快乐的唯一方法,所以最后应做改动。

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Everyone wants to have a happy life, but do you know how to be happy?

The first secret of happiness is to be honest. No one wants to make friends with dishonest people . What’s more , if you lie to others , you will worry whether they will know the truth so that you will be not only very anxious but also unhappy.

Maybe you will wonder how to keep happy. One of the best ways is to tell the truth to your friends, teachers and parents . Secondly , you ought to face your mistakes . As the proverb says, “failure is the mother of success.”Don’t be afraid of your mistakes.

Generally speaking . I believe that we should be honest. It is one of the best ways to keep ourselves happy. Let everybody around us be honest. I believe an honest brings our life happiness.

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1.Are you happy? If not, will you make any changes and let yourself be happy? So let me tell you some of the secrets about happiness.

First , I think the colorful life is the source of happiness. Because a lot of wonderful things must have appeared in your life . If you complain about the unfairness in life , you should face it and tell yourself “ I’m strong!” Then you will be more and more worried unless you are satisfied with all the things you have now.

The secret of happiness is just a way you relax yourself . I hope all of you will become happier.

2.As we all know, happiness is a very important thing. I think the secret of happiness is smiling all the time.

If you smile, it will make you happy and then you can get happiness . And remember to argue with others as seldom as possible . When you lose your temper, please tell yourself to smile, and then happiness will come.

To be a friendly person, a helpful person, and a generous person, you shouldn’t get angry or worried easily ,and then happiness will come to your life!

3.Long long ago, a man asked one hundred people what the secret of happiness was, and they all gave him different answers . In my opinion, the secret of happiness is to be optimistic all the time.

Everyone meets difficulties and make mistakes. Optimism keeps you smiling and gives you power and courage when you face them. Once I failed to pass the Maths exam, my tears were falling, but my father told me, “ That’s the fact which you couldn’t change . But you can change your future. That’s under your control. Come on,be optimistic and have another try.” Finally, I became happy again. From then on, I always remember my father’s words and become happier and happier.

I want to say that to be optimistic isn’t difficult. Keep smiling is a simple way. Remember there are many people who lose more than you. “An optimist sees an opportunity in every trouble.” That’s my motto and I hope you can get some ideas from it. Happiness is easy just like it.

4.In fact everyone is happy,but sometimes people get confused by a lot of things , such as

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