公开课_高中英语写作课件

英语书面表达English Composition Writing

The essay

What makes a good essay?

A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph, some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph. Topic paragraph

Supporting Paragraph 1Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3 Concluding paragraph

Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement Topic statementgeneral statement

To many students, school life is boring and tiring. However, I find my school life meaningful and colourful.topic statement

Supporting Paragraphs (Body) ParagraphsTS SS SS SS SSFirstly, ... Secondly, ... Moreover, ... Finally, . . . However, ...

In addition, … Furthermore, ...

ConclusionPersonally,… in conclusion, in brief, From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that ... In summary, it is wiser ...

The paragraph

What makes a good paragraph?

A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.There are different kinds of bee. Some live in large groups like the honey bee, and make theirtopic nests in trees or holes in the rocks. Other sentence species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all…

Topic sentence:________________

Wherever you go in our school, you see green lawns and trees and beautiful flowers. Dotted among these trees and flowers are many buildings of different styles. A stream runs through our school and you always see everything reflected in the water. Our school is just like a garden.

A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.I believe English is more important than other foreign languages for many reasons. First of all, English is spoken by a large number of people, and these people are the most widely spread across the world in a great many countries. Secondly, English is the most widely used language on the internet. It has become an on-line language. Thirdly, the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in our country and English will be very useful. Lastly, …

正确使用有关连接词时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually, since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless 因果关系： because, since, as, thanks to, owing to, as a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though, in spite of the fact that 递进关系： what’s more, in addition, furthermore on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系： if, unless, as long as, on condition that … 表 列 举： for example / instance, take…for example, that’s to say, in other words, as follows 表 总 结： in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word, on the whole, as has been stated

A good paragraph is one with varied sentence patterns.

丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构) 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思， 能增加文章的文采。 感叹句 e.g. What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was

!强调句 e.g. It was this young boy that

helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.

倒装句

省略句

e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man. e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.

with短语 e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.

定语从句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes

should be a place where we can find much useful information. Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.各种名词性从句

e.g. That’s what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.

各种状语从句

e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, we’ll catch up sooner or later.