启航黄涛点评2013年考研英语大小作文(2)

比如可以选用我们冲刺课堂上传授的精彩句型1， " Whoever standing in front of this miniature will be overwhelmingly impressed. 2，How thought-provoking it seems to be! 或3，What is vividly illustrated in the painting above is that …. (对漫画笼统地描述)。 然后再补上后面的文字解释说明：“The caption（图画中的文字） make choices/alternatives, choose/opt to do sth 分的关键词。

第二段要求展开阐释漫画背后所预示的主题，并加以具体论证说明。在这一段首句可以直接采用" It is, most likely, that the drawer intends not only to think about its real connotation but also to display a serious situation to us. 在句型运用方面，可以考虑使用启航课堂上反复提到的必杀词组“As is universally acknowledged，和What makes things even better/worse等。

第三段可以结合自己的实际来阐述自己未来人生的选择，是出国还是考研，并给出自己的理由。

Sample Writing

As is apparently drawn in this miniature, in the middle stand many graduates, confronting a few choices such as seeking jobs, receiving further education, going abroad and so on. The Chinese caption above informs us readers of the conspicuous message that various folks will make different choices upon their graduation. （参见黄涛冲刺班作文讲义第7页作文经典句型）How impressive this drawing seems to be in depicting one of the most prevalent themes that college graduates are confronting various alternatives before graduation.

After careful reflection and mediation, we examinees come to understand the enlightening drawing. I contend that this thought-provoking image conveys one profound layer of implication concerning choices. (参见黄涛冲刺班讲义精彩段落第15页内容) It is universally acknowledged that college graduation no longer ends and we should make different choices according to our varying situation. (参见黄涛冲刺班讲义高分句型必备部分)

From what have been discussed above, it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to choose a job that can be done within his capability. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make it work. On the one hand, we should be sensible to find what we are skillful at and make a plan about the future. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to change to another job if it does not fit us. (参见黄涛冲刺班讲义V-40页)

In my personal sense, the message applies to our young graduates especially. In such a rat-race society, everyone is bound to make a choice at this critical life stage. In this sense, I should make a rational choice after graduation. Just as the Nobel Prize winner Mo Yan puts it, it is our choice that has changed everything in our life. （参见黄涛作文冲刺班讲义第12页作文九大高分句式之引用名人名言）

更多经典高分句型可以参考长达43页的黄涛作文冲刺资料，这是历年来广大考生最后作文冲刺用的葵花宝典，在考场上广大黄桃们可以按照自己喜欢背诵的高级句子来造就自己的高分作文。

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