英语专业八级改错模拟题(16)

6.need--\.―so+代动词do+somebody‖这个结构已经替代了前面句子的谓语，是一个动词性替代，做简短反应，这里加一个动词need是多余的。

7.the--\.be in charge 意思是―主管，控制‖，这里是说孩子们有时候试图成为控制者。如果说in one's charge或者in the charge of somebody，意思则是被某人看管。考试大

8.Since--While/Although/Though.这里要理解主从句的逻辑关系，从句是说小孩子也没有意识到自己的控制欲，主句说他实际上确实有控制欲，两者不是因果关系，而是让步关系。

9.permit^--this.permit是及物动词，热切不能直接以动词不定式作宾语，必须有名词或代词作宾语，所以要加一个代词this用于指代前文所述内容。

10.the--others指―别人‖，没有数量范围的限定；the others指―其他的人‖，有数量范围的限定。这里只是泛指―别人‖，所以不应该加定冠词。

英语专业八级改错模拟题(11)

Every Englishman is born with a certain miraculous power that

(1) makes him the master of the world. When he wants a thing, he never

tells himself that he wants it. He waits patiently until there (2)comes into his

mind, no one knows how, a burning conviction it is his moral and religious

duty to conquer those who possess the thing (3)he wants. Then he becomes

resistible. Like the aristocrat, he does (4)that pleases him and grabs what he

covets; like the shopkeeper, he (5)pursues his purpose in the industry and

steadfastness that come (6)from strong religious conviction and deep sense of

mortal (7)responsibility. He is never at loss for an effective moral attitude.

(8) For the great champion of freedom and national independence, he

conquers and annexes half the world, and calls it Colonization. When

(9) he wants a new market for his adulterating Manchester goods, he

sends a missionary to teach the natives the Gospel of Peace. The

(10) natives kills the missionary; he flies to arms to defense of

Christianity; fights for it; conquers it; and takes the market as a

reward from heaven.