writing -- a letter of advice

[EW P3] Read the Possible Version aloud Dear Tom, 呈现主题 ---就来信 I’m sorry you have had a quarrel with your friend. Here are some tips for you.呈现需解决的问题

First, don’t be too worried. Most friends have disagreements from time to time. Second, why not say sorry for what you did wrong? If you do this, your friend will know you value his/her friendship and want to make up with him/her. At the same time, he/she will surely realize he/she was at fault, too. Third, talk with your friend about your deepest feelings and thoughts. Only in this way can you understand each other better. 提出针对性的建议 I hope you will find these ideas useful.Yours, 表明观点或提出希望 Li Hua

建议信---- “三段式结构” Para.1 ----呈现主题(就来信呈现需解决的问题) Para.2 ----提出针对性的建议 Para.3 ----表明观点或提出希望

Para.1 呈现主题---就来信呈现需解决的问题 What problem does Xiao Dong have? ----- He is not good at communicating with people and can’t make good friends with them. I’m sorry you have Your show time: had a quarrel with your friend. Here are Write the first paragraph some tips for you. The following are my suggestions.

Para.2 ----提出针对性的建议(适当说明原因) 注意使用过渡衔接词和提建议的句式[EW. P3] First, don’t be too worried. (Most friends have disagreements from time to time.) Second, why not say sorry for what you did wrong? (If you do this, your friend will know you value his/her friendship and want to make up with him/her.) At the same time, he/she will surely realize he/she was at fault, too. Third, talk with your friend about your deepest feelings and thoughts. (Only in this way can you understand each other better.)

To begin with, you should be concerned about others and try to be friendly as possible as you can. (If you are always ready to help others, your classmates will know you better.) What’s more, it is a good idea for you to be a good listener while others are speaking. (In this way, people will feel comfortable to be with you.) At last, you had better take an active part in class activities (where you can show your talent and make friends with other partners.)

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表示顺序的常用衔接词(Orderly Transitional makers) First of all,...In addition… 首先，……;另 外，……; To begin with...,Moreover. / What’s more / Besides..,Finally... 第一，……;此外……, 最后…… Firstly,...Secondly,...Finally,... 第一……; 第二……;最后…… First, … Second, … Third, …

Share your ideas to change the situation with group member and give your reasons.Your show time: Write the second paragraph

Para.3 ----表明观点或提出希望 Some useful sentences ---- EW P3 Your show time: Write the third paragraph

1. Finish your letter. 2. 《周报》同步评估试题 第1期 阅读 C 篇和D篇 (

选做一篇)以及完形填空

Dear Xiao Dong, I am glad to hear from you. From your letter, I know that you are not good at communicating with people and don’t know how to make friends in the new school, so you need my advice. First of all, you’d better find the chance to join in people’s discussion to know more about each other, so that you can find the classmates who have the same hobbies as you. Besides, it would be a good idea if you could show your great interest in the topic by asking questions while listening to others. Finally, when they are in trouble, you should offer help to your classmates and share their sorrows and pains. I hope my advice will be helpful and you can make some friends successful soon. Yours,

Dear Xiao Dong, I am glad to hear from you. From your letter, I know that you are not good at communicating with people and don’t know how to make friends in the new school, and the followings are my suggestions.[回应来信，指出问题]

First of all, you’d better find the chance to join in people’s discussion to know more about each other, so that you can find the classmates who have the same hobbies as you. Besides, it is a good idea for you to be a good listener while others are speaking. In this way, people will feel comfortable to be with you and would like to make friends with you.

Finally, when they are in trouble, you should offer help to your classmates and share their sorrows and pains, which can show you’re a kind and easy-going person. [针对问题提出建议] I hope my advice will be helpful to you and you can make some friends successful soon. [表明观点或提出希望]

Yours, Miss Wang

[《全优》P9] join vt. / vi. 加入；参加 1) join a club/ an organization / an army ---- to be a member of Has everyone joined the Youth League? 2) join sb. (in doing sth.) ---- to do sth. with sb. Together Would you join us for dinner? 3) join in +活动 ---- take part in ---- Will join (us) in the discussion?

join in / take part in / attend 的区别 ---- 详见《全优》P9

I still find it hard to make good friends with them. [《全优》P9] find +it (形式宾语)+adj. / n. (宾补) + to do / that --- (真正宾语) 常用此结构的动词：consider 认为; feel; find(觉得); guess; imagine (想象); make; think We all consider it our duty to hand in homework on time. 他觉得看电影学英语很有用。 useful to learn English He thinks / finds it ___________________by seeing films.