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真题再现 【2013年广东高考 分值-15分】请根据以下信息， 写一篇关于移民火星的快讯。志愿者的选拔 1. 到2015年， 在全球选出约30名去火星(the Mars)的志愿者。 志愿者的条件 2. 至少18岁； 3. 做好不回地球的准备； 4. 愿与他人保持良好的关系。 专家的观点 5. 火星生活条件太艰苦； 6. 面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧。 志愿者观点 7. 厌倦地球生活，想体验火星生活； 8. 如果成功， 就是人类英雄。

【写作指导 Writing Instruction】 1. 认真审题 Check Information Carefully 1)确定题材 2)确定文章主题 3)确定人称/时态 新闻报道类 news 报道客观真实，语言通俗易懂 第一句4w---who/what when/where 第三人称 / 一般过去(现在/将来)时

2. 整合信息 Organize Information Logically 根据要点的逻辑关系进行组合： 1 2,3,4 5,6 7, 8

3. 翻译组句 Make Sentence Correctly

1. 到2015年， 在全球选出约30名去火星(the Mars)的志愿者。

1) 参考句型和词组：志愿者：volunteer, person, people 选 出： choose, select, 全 球： all over the world, the whole world, the global different part of the world pick out

1.1 About thirty volunteers who want to immigrate to the Mars will be chosen from all over the world by the year of 2015. 1.2 By 2015, about thirty volunteers will be selected from the whole world and sent to the Mars.

志愿者的条件

2. 至少18岁； 3. 做好不回地球的准备； 4. 愿与他人保持良好的关系。

2) 参考句型和词组：至少 ： at least 做好不回地球的准备 ： be prepared not to return(go back) to the Earth Be ready for living on the Mars forever 愿与...保持良好的关系：be willing to keep a good relationship with... Like contecting with...

2.1 The volunteers should be at least 18 years old, be prepared not to return to the Earth, and be willing to keep a good relationship with others. 2.2 The volunteers should be at least 18 years old, be ready for living on the Mars forever, and like contecting with different people.

专家的观点

5. 火星生活条件太艰苦； 6. 面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧。

3) 参考句型和词组：火星生活条件太艰苦 ：the living conditions on Mars are very hard it is very difficult for us to live on Mars 面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧： face the extremely (severe/ very) cold climate, loneliness and fear(scare)

3.1 The living conditions on Mars are very hard because they have to face the extremely cold climate, loneliness and fear. 3.2 It is very difficult for us to live on Mars, because of the severe cold climate, loneliness and scare.

志愿者观点

7. 厌倦地球生活，想体验火星生活；

4) 参考翻译： 4.1 Volunteers are eager to experience different life on Mars, for they feel bored of the life on Earth. 4.2 Because volunteers are tired of living on Earth, they want to experience

different life o

n Mars.

8. 如果成功， 就是人类英雄。

5) 参考翻译：

5.1 If they succeed, they will beregarded as the heroes of human kind. 5.2 If successful, they will become human’s heroes.

【写作指导】 4. 润色成篇 Polish Article Properly1. 据报道： 到2015年， 在全球选出约30名去火星(the Mars)的志愿者。 It is reported that..., As is reported..., According to the report...

1.1 It is reported that about thirty volunteers who want to immigrate to the

Mars will be chosen from all over the world by the year of 2015.1.2 As is reported, by 2015, about thirty volunteers will be selected from the whole world and sent to the Mars.

4. 润色成篇然而(可是) , 志愿者 2. 至少18岁； 3. 做好不回地球的准备； 4. 愿与他人保持良好的关系。

However, But

2.1 However,the volunteers should be at least 18 years old, be prepared not to

return to the Earth, and be willing to keep a good relationship with others.2.2 But the volunteers should be at least 18 years old, be ready for living on the Mars forever, and like contecting with different people.

4. 润色成篇专家提醒我们 Experts reminded us that 5. 火星生活条件太艰苦； 科学家指出 Scientists pointed out that 6. 面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧。

3.1 Experts reminded us that the living conditions on Mars are very hard because they have to face the extremely cold climate, loneliness and fear. 3.2 Scientists pointed out that it is very difficult for us to live on Mars because of the severe cold climate, loneliness and scare.

4. 润色成篇尽管如此， 志愿者 In spite of this,Even so, 7. 厌倦地球生活，想体验火星生活；

4.1 In spite of this, volunteers are still eager to experience different life on Mars, for they feel bored of the life on Earth. 4.2 Even so, volunteers are tired of living on Earth, so they want to experience different life on Mars.更重要的是，有人认为... What’s more important, some of them think that... 最重要的,... 8. 如果成功， 就是人类英雄。 Most importantly, ...

5.1 What’s more important, some of them think that, if they succeed, they will be regarded as the heroes of human kind. 5.2 Most importantly, if successful, they will become human’s heroes.

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