写作中怎样使用高级词汇与复杂结构

写作中怎样使用 复杂结构和高级词汇

写作中怎样使用高级词汇与复杂结构

一.复杂结构:

1.使用适当的时态3.使用不定式 5.使用V.+ing形式 7.使用状语从句 9.使用虚拟语气

2.适当的语态4.使用过去分词 6.使用名词性从句 8.使用定语从句

10.使用强调句,倒装句,感叹句 11.使用并列句

写作中怎样使用高级词汇与复杂结构

一、怎样运用复杂结构：1. 改变时态The bell is ringing now. (一般)

There goes the bell. (高级) 2. 改变语态People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般)

It is suggested that the conference be put off.(高级)

写作中怎样使用高级词汇与复杂结构

3. 使用不定式He is so kind that he can help me. (一般)

He is so kind as to help me. (高级) 4. 使用过去分词She walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般)

Followed by many students, she… . (高级)Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten . (一般)

Once seen, it can … . (高级)

写作中怎样使用高级词汇与复杂结构

5. 使用v-ing形式When he arrives please give me an e-mail. (一般)

On his arriving/ arrival, please give…. (高级)If the weather permits, I’ll come tomorrow. (一般)

Weather permitting, I’ll come tomorrow. (高级)Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. (一般)

Now our School has three teachers, teaching 48 pupils. (高级)

写作中怎样使用高级词汇与复杂结构

6. 使用名词性从句It disappointed everybody that he didn’t turn up. (一般)

The fact that he didn’t turn up disappointed everybody. (高级)I happened to have met him. (一般) It happened that I had met him. (高级) To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (一般) What surprised him is that the girl…. (高级)

写作中怎样使用高级词汇与复杂结构

7. 使用状语从句I won’t believe what he says. (一般)

No matter what he says, I won’t believe. (高级)If you come back before six o’clock, you can go out. (一般)

You can go out on condition that you come back before…. (高级)The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. (一般) The meal was so nice that we all…. (高级)

写作中怎样使用高级词汇与复杂结构

8. 使用定语从句The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般)

The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of. (高级)I studied Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer at school. (一般)

The subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English…. (高级)

写作中怎样使用高级词汇与复杂结构

9. 使用虚拟语气The ship didn’t sink because there were the efforts of the captain. (一般)

But for the efforts of the captain, the ship would have sunk. (高级)I wasn’t invited to the party, so I didn’t attend it. (一般)

If I had been invited to the party, I would have attended it. (高级)

写作中怎样使用高级词汇与复杂结构

10. 使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920. (一般)

It was not until 1920 that regular radio…. (高级)Though I’m weak, I will make the effort. (一般)

Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort. (高级)We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well. (一般)

How glad we were to see the crops and...! (高级)

写作中怎样使用高级词汇与复杂结构

11.

使用并列句If you go through the gate, you’ll find the entrance to Bear Country. (一般) Go through the gate, and you’ll find…. (高级) When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (一般)

The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. (高级)I got up late this morning. I didn’t catch the early bus. (一般)

I got up late this morning, otherwise I could have caught the early bus. (高级)

写作中怎样使用高级词汇与复杂结构

四、怎样运用高级词汇：As a result, the plan was a failure. (一般)

The plan turned out to be a failure. (高级)She went to Austria in order to study music. (一般)

She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music. (高级)Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. (一般)

Thanks to the good weather, our journey…. (高级)

写作中怎样使用高级词汇与复杂结构

怎样运用高级词汇：When he heard she had died, he went pale with sorrow. (一般)

At the news of her death, he went…. (高级)She can’t correctly pronounce the word. (一般)

She has trouble in pronouncing the word. (高级)Who will be on duty today? (一般)

Whose turn is it to be on duty today? (高级)

写作中怎样使用高级词汇与复杂结构

She doesn’t like sports.

She cares nothing for sports.We had to go home.

What we had to do was go home.

写作中怎样使用高级词汇与复杂结构

五、常见语法错误分析：1. 句子缺谓语 1) The building like a match box. 2) He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom. 2.主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作 主语时，谓语的单复数形式出现错误。 1) A worker of the farm lead us to the field. 2) All the students like books that was written by Lu Xun.

写作中怎样使用高级词汇与复杂结构

3.时态错误1) When he came back, he found that his wife has gone to bed. 2) What are you doing this time yesterday? 4.词性混用 1) She enjoys study English. 2) If anyone against the plan, please let me know.