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初中英语书面表达 写作技巧指导萍乡六中 刘冬萍

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brainstormWe like listening to music. We study . We play computer games for long.

Teenagers’We like reading books. We often play Sports.

colorful lifeWe go to KFC . Sometimes we travel. Sometimes we stay up studying.

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We like listening to music. We study all day. We play computer games for long.

Teenagers’We like reading books. We often play Sports.

healthy lifeSometimes we travel. We go to KFC. Sometimes we stay up studying.

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写作第一步

审

认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。 找出文章要表达的中心。

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审健康很重要。 健康很重要。在学习和 工作的压力日趋增大的 今天， 今天，会休息的人才会 有健康的身体。 有健康的身体。人们是 如何度过假期的呢？ 如何度过假期的呢？国 际健康组织对此作了一 次调查， 次调查，右图是他们此 次的调查结果。 次的调查结果。根据你 所得的信息， 所得的信息，请为国际 健康组织写一篇完整的 调查报告, 调查报告,并提倡大家 进行假日休闲。 进行假日休闲。

travel stay at home

visit friends or parents work

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写作第二步

列

用简单的句子或短语列出文章要 点。

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根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句 子列出文章的要点 如何度假 调查报告 倡议假日休闲travel stay at home visit friends or parents work

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列 A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.

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How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.

a nice head

a nice bodyA lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

a nice tail

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写作第三步：

加

加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构， 开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂 亮。

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1. Second , we should keep quiet in the library. 2. First , we have to wear our uniforms to go to school, though most of us don’t like them at all. 3. Every school has its own rules for students. We have many school rules to follow in our daily life. 4. What’s more, we ought to return books on time. 5. Our school rules are good for us, I will try my best to follow them. 6. Third , we must do lots of homework.

3 2 1 4 6 5

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How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well.

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写作第四步：

连

恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清 晰，各个部分衔接自然。

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关联词1.表示并列或递进 an

d, as well as, both…and, 表示并列或递进: 表示并列或递进 not only…but also, neither…nor; 2.表示选择 or, either…or; 表示选择: 表示选择 3.表示转折 but, however, although, though, after all, 表示转折: 表示转折 4.表示因果 because, so, therefore 表示因果: 表示因果 5.表示条件 if , unless 表示条件: 表示条件 6.表示对比 instead, not…but, 表示对比: 表示对比 on the one hand…on the other hand; 7.表示解释 for example, for instance, such as, 表示解释: 表示解释 that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序 to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, 表示顺序: 表示顺序 later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end; 9.表示强调 also, besides, what’s more, actually, 表示强调: 表示强调 in fact, 10.表示结论 all in all, altogether, in a word, 表示结论: 表示结论 generally speaking,

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LET’S PLAY THE GAME. _____ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert _____. We like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking. _____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. _____, he smiled.

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连 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.