读写任务--主题句及拓展句
时间:2025-05-02
时间:2025-05-02
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How to summarize an argumentation? 议论三步法 skills 一、找 1.论点—观点(主题句, 关键词) 2.论据— (不同的观点) 3.结论—(解决方法) 二、改 1.语态的转换(人称) 2.同义词、反义词等的转换 3.句式的转换 三、写 将句子整合,用自己的话写出摘要
四.套用:1.引言句 (1) In the passage, the author holds the view that + 从句…. (2) The passage gives the view that + 从句… 2.论点+论据+(结论) 五.运用简单的连词要点连接起来but, and, so, however, because, therefore, besides, including, such as , not only … but 等等
Honesty is one of the most treasured traditional values in China. (论点)The children are taught to be honest when they are very young. At schools the students are also instructed to be honest. However, with the development of society, we often hear complaints about dishonesty. (论据) Reports with the theme of dishonesty often appear in the media. For example, some people try to get rich and live a comfortable life. But they do not work hard honestly, instead they cheat others. They sell something quite ordinary at a very high price. Some people's delaying paying back the loan can serve as another example. Some people, including some college students, get loan from the bank, and promise to pay within, say, 3 years. However, they don't do that.
The dishonest people sometimes can get benefit from their behaviors. (论据) So some people assert that dishonesty can bring people benefit, while honesty only makes people suffer. Is that so? Definitely not. It is always true that honesty is the best policy. It pays to be honest. The cheater selling "the treasure" mentioned above will surely be disclosed and punished some day.
On the contrary, if he had been honest, neither the buyer nor he himself would have suffered. The people who do not return money in time will sooner or later become infamous, and will not get the money from others again. If he had acted differently, he would have earned respect and trust, (论点) meanwhile, the bank would not have suffered from loss.
The passage mainly tells us that nowadays many people are dishonest for their own benefit, for they not only neglect our traditional values, but also want to escape being punished.
第二部分写作段落由哪些句子组成1.主题句topic sentence 一般出现在句首,是对全段的概括。 也可出现在段末。 2.扩展句supporting details 对主题句进行举例说明论证,或 进行详细解释。 3.结尾句 concluding sentence 对主题句的呼应,中肯切要。 (主题句)Books are our teachers. (扩展句1)They hand down knowledge from generations to generations.(扩展句2)They teach us how to do things and how to live a useful life.(结尾句) Therefore, we should read as many books as possible.
如何写好每段主题句: (
每段第一句) (六种模式)
模式 .1 直接回答要点
写作要点是询问考生 的看法时,对提问直 接作出回答。
Model: 假如你处在那些动物的处境,你会有什么反应?(2009广东高考读写任务要点2) If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I could feel annoyed when people keep photographing me.
常用词组:In my opinion / as for me / as far as I am concerned 你理想中的大学生活是什么样的?In my eyes, my ideal college life is wonderful/relaxing.
模式2. 表明立场
明确表示对某观点支持、 赞同或反对。
Model: 你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。(2009年广东高考读写任务要点3) I believe that taking photos with animals should be banned.
Discuss the expressions of supporting and objecting表示支持或赞同的句型: I agree with the statement that … I am in favor of … I appreciate that I approve of the idea that… I believe that … I agree with what the writer said/says. 表示反对或不赞同的句型: I disagree with the idea that… I am opposed to the idea that … 你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法。 I disapprove of the idea that… 1) In some way, I (2010 agree年广东高考读写任务要点 with… but… I amthe notwriter in favor of sounds encouraging kids with cash What said reasonable, but… just because they have got good marks.
不直接回答写作要 模式3. 重述要点 点,而是翻译要点作 为段落主题句。 中学生活和大学生活的差别. (2008高考读写任 Model: 在生活中谅解他人有何重要意义 . 务要点3) From the story I learn that understanding As we all know, college is widely different and forgiving others plays an important role from middle school. in our life.词组积累 play an important role/part have a bad/good influence/effect have a close relation /connection do harm to be different from
说明某一品质或做某事的重要性时,从 多方面来阐述,如社会、生活、工作、学 习等方面来论述,切忌泛泛而谈,同时还 要条理清晰。常用到的句型有: ⑴ ... is of great importance/significance/ value/help.To begin with,it can...Besides, it strengthens the tie between... Finally,it helps to... ⑵ ... has a great impact on … Firstly, ...Secondly,... Thirdly,...
模式4. 总述原因
Model: 使我们生活发生变化有哪些原因? 你支持青少年的秘密应该与父母分享的理由是什么? I insist that teenagers ’reasons secrets should bechanges shared with their There are three for the that parents for reasons as follows. have taken place in our life.Useful expressions for reasons: There are several reasons that contribute to… …的原因显而易见 句 The for this are obvious … 型reasons …的原因有多种 提 … for reasons as follows 示 …的原因如下 The reason why… is that…
模式5.引出建议、方法、措施、步骤等 如