高三英语第一轮复习写作素能培养第6讲：运用高级词汇与句式打造作文亮点

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第三部分 写作素能培养

第三部分 第六讲 运用高级词汇与句式， 打造作文亮点

写作时，“高级词汇与高级句式”如能运用 贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一两处，也 会为你的作文增添色彩，赢得阅卷老师的青 睐。 一、使用高级词汇 1.标新立异 写作时要恰当得体地使用一些蕴含感情色彩， 别人有可能想不到的词汇，恰当地求新求异。

As far as I'm concerned,parents' much protection will do more harm than good to children's future development. →As far as I'm concerned,parents' limitless protection will do more harm than good to children's future development. I received your email last week,but I am busy preparing for my final exam,which is important for me,so I didn't reply to you without delay. →I received your email last week,but I am busy preparing for my final exam,which is vital for me, so I didn't reply to you without delay.

2.短语优先 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 To achieve one's dream,one must try to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach. →To achieve one's dream,one must make great efforts to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach. What's more,we can pour out the troubles we face, and release our pressure from different aspects. →What's more,we can pour out the troubles we are faced with,and release our pressure from different aspects.

3.避免重复 尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选 择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。 I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. →I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches.

用较高级词汇代替加黑的词或短语。 1.We all have the same chance.____________ 2.We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend. ____________ 3.I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us.____ ______ 4.He didn't listen to what I said in the class. ______________