2012名师备课高考英语写作基础技能提升：15 句子润色 简单句合并成复合句

有时为了使句子的连贯性更强, 表达 也更为贴切、自然, 我们在两个或者多 个简单句之间加上and, but, or(或者, 否 则), for (因为), while(而, 却), when(就在 这个时候), not only ...but also等并列连 词, 使其成为并列复合句。如：

⑴ Our outdoor activity will last three hours. We’ll be back at about 11 o’clock →Our outdoor activity will last three hours and we’ll be back at about 11 o’clock.

⑵ You must hurry. You’ll miss the plane. →You must hurry or you’ll miss the plane. ⑶ Honey is sweet. The bee stings. →Honey is sweet but the bee stings.

在两个或者多个简单句之间加上when, after, as, because, where, which, who等从属连词, 可以使简单句变成复合句。如： ⑴ We will organize all kinds of activities in our English club. We can not only practise but also learn more English in the activities.(改为含定语从句的复合句) →We will organize all kinds of activities in our English club in which we can not only practise but also learn more English.

⑵ He missed the first bus. He came to

school late.(改为含状语从句的复合句)

→Because he missed the first bus, he

came to school late.

→He missed the first bus, so he came

to school late.

即时练习 将下列各组句子合并成并列复合句或主从复 合句。

1. He was tired. He went to bed. 1. He was tired, so he went to bed.

2. Our teacher must be at home. The door is open. 2. Our teacher must be at home, for the door is open.

3. ⑴ A satellite is an object. ⑵ A satellite travels in an orbit round another object in space. ⑶ A satellite is either natural or manmade. 3. A satellite is an object, either natural or man-made, which travels in an orbit round another object in space.

4. ⑴ We high school students do have some growing pains. ⑵ We can get rid of them correctly and wisely. 4. We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely.

5. ⑴ There was once a famous detective. ⑵ He was named Sherlock Holmes. ⑶ He lived in London. ⑷ The time was at the end of the nineteenth century.

5. There was once a famous detective named Sherlock who lived in London at the end of the nineteenth century.

6. ⑴ The other day we had an English speech contest. ⑵ I won the first prize in the contest. 6. The other day we had an English speech contest in which I won the first prize.

7. ⑴ 79.3％ of the surveyed netizens say that their main motivation is to help their parents to live a better life. ⑵ 67.7％ claim that they work hard in order to change their own fate.

7. 79.3％ of the surveyed netizens say that their main motivation is to help their parents to live a better life while 67.7％ claim that they work hard in order to change their own fate.

8. We must study hard. Knowledge is power. 8. We must study hard because knowledge is power.

9. ⑴ Students can improve their writing ability in