高一英语基础写作讲评精美课件

要 如何算是一篇好文章？ 点 1.覆盖了所有的要点 全 2. 应用了较多的语法结构 和词汇 词汇,句型 (高级)和 连 接 词

语法多样化(较复杂) 3. 有效地使用了语句间的 连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 语言地道， 4. 语言得体规范

目前,有不少的中国人讲汉语时喜欢夹杂着英语.就此现象, 你们班最近举行了一场辩论赛.请根据下表的提示,用英语 客观的介绍一下辩论的结果. 40%的同学认为: 有点讽刺意义; 对学英语毫无作用 60%同学认为: 喜欢这种方式; 更有助于表达思想; 你的观点:

要求:1.可适当发挥,不要逐句翻译;

2. 补充自己的观点;

3. 字数:约100个单词.开头已经给出,不计入总词数’ 4.参考词汇:讽刺的---ridiculous

Nowadays, more and more Chinese people can use English in their daily communication. …

优点基本都能完成了试题规定的任务.应用 了语句的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑， 基本达到了预期的写作目的。

存在的问题

1. 标点的使用

But on the other hand, There were also 60% who thought oppositely.

, thereBut 60% of the students thought it is good for us,

it is helpful for us to express what we want to say.

. It is helpful…/ and it is helpful…

存在的问题

1. 标点的使用

, becauseI agree the first one. Because when we talk with each other. Some English words are easier than Chinese

, some

存在的问题

2. 语句缺乏相关性

This is my opinion. What about you? What is you idea? Many students took part in it and the activity was held successfully.

存在的问题

2. 语句缺乏相关性

And we also should read more books, Remember more words, and listen to more English songs so that we can speak English fluently.

存在的问题

3.Chinglish

It also may let our culture disappear.

It also may lead to/result in the disappearance of our culture.I think using English in our daily communication

will make us do more mistakes in English exams.

will mislead us in the English exams.

They like this way which is convenient toexpress themselves.

They like this convenient way to express themselves.4. 简单问题的复杂化

5. 语言表达的单一性问题think agree say insist

support like

believe be fond of

6. 语言的表达缺乏准确性As far as I concernedIn the other hand By this way 40 percent of students say English

7. 层次结构问题8. 时态、人称一致的问题 9. 文章中心偏移

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Nowadays, more and more Chinese people can use English in their daily communication. Facing this phenomenon, we had a debate.

About 40% of the students thought it was a little ridiculous, for we were Chinese and should be good at our mother tongue. It was no use communicating with each other in English in daily life for English study, they said. But the other students believed that this way would be helpful to express their feelings, so

they liked the way.

As for me , I agree it is good for us to improve our English. With more practice like that, we won’t feel shy while communicating with foreigners. In a word, it is a way worth trying.