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This morning I lost my iphone on my bus ride to school. It was a birthday gift from my parents.

I was so upset that I couldn’t concentrate in the first class. After class, my head teacher

called me out and unexpectedly showed me the iphone. It turned out that my phone slipped out of my pocket when I hurriedly got off. A kind passenger noticed it and tried to call me. But it was too late. So he had to follow me all the way to the school gate and gave it to the guard.

How excited and how deeply moved I was！I have decided to be as kind and helpful as the passenger.

评分标准：

1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，

确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3.词数少于 80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。

4.评分时，应注意的主要内容为：

●内容要点：具体的丢失物品；丢失的过程；失而复得的过程；感想（失而复得的感想）

●应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性。

●拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美

拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。

●如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

各档次的给分范围和要求

I. 第五档（很好）；（21-25分）：