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[3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class. [3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.

【亮点点评】

[1]“有 倾向”。

[2]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、意义连贯。

[3] follow表示“跟随，追求(趋势或时尚)”

[4]用于引出原因。

[5]which引导非限制性定语从句。

[6] it为形式主语，不定式为真正主语。

[7]“远远超出他们的消费能力”。beyond表示“超出 范围”。

[8]强调句型，此处是强调主语。not but连接并列成分。

[9]“而不是”。

佳句临摹

1. 佳句：It is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.

临摹：对大学生来说，了解校园以外的世界是非常必要的。

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2. 佳句：In modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which have a great attraction to young college students.

临摹：在世界上或许没有什么游戏像赌博

像赌博的那么有害和危险了，它经常会导致一个人破产，还会玷污人的心灵。

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3. 佳句：Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous brands.

临摹：很多同学经常玩电脑游戏，这是浪费时间，而不是一种有益的放松方式。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese：

1)简单介绍个人情况

2)说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额

3)保证会合理利用贷款并表明还款的决心

A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan

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本题属于情景式命题，要求写一封申请信。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：简单介绍自己的情况，表明写信目的：申请助学贷款;说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额;保证合理利用贷款并表明还款决心，最后表示感谢。

高分范文

A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan

Sep 12th, 2008

To whom it may concern,

I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics. I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years.

My parents are both laid-off workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education. [3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. [4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.