雅思写作:如何写出雅思官方写作风格的高分作(3)

发布时间:2021-06-06

最后来看下句2的谓语, 共有两个, 分别为begin 及 be widely thought , 一主动一被动, 这又何尝不是增加句子灵活度的方式?

接下来进入到主体段2:

However, learning to understand and share the value system of a whole society cannot be achieved just in the home.(1) Once a child goes to school, they are entering a wider community where teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home. (2)At school, children will experience working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society. (3)This experience should teach them how to co-operate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community.(4)

先来看本段的句1, 一方面双重否定表肯定了- not 及just用法。 再一方面还起到了承上启下的作用,起到对学校教育的论述。 句2, once及where引导两个从句做嵌套, 句子虽长, 但论述逻辑清晰。 段落的句尾再次出现平行结构, 也是为了和上段做呼应。

But to be a valuable member of any community is not like learning a simple skill. It is something that an individual goes on learning throughout life and it is the responsibility of every member of a society to take responsibility for helping the younger generation to become active and able members of that society.

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