的所有行都写满，最多空一行！（因为老师判卷子不会数单词数量的，老师认为你只要把所有空白地方写满就算单词够了，不然你写的密密麻麻，写的再多也算不够数量）2为了避免语法错误还有不会写单词，全部用简单句，一句话一句话的写，但要注意加几个短语，句中加几个Althouth.举例用for example最后一段开头用In a word总结等等…加几个短语就能提2～3分！以上内容只适合英语作文个位数的同鞋

◆ 相关过渡语

1). 表示时间顺序: first, then, afterwards, meanwhile, later，first of all, finally, at last…

2). 表示空间顺序: near, next to, far from, in front of, on the left, on one side…

3). 表示比较、对照: like, unlike, such as, but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, nevertheless, otherwise…

4). 表示因果关系: because, for, as a result, therefore, thus…

5). 表示递进关系: besides, what’s more, what was worse, moreover, furthermore, in addition, on top of…

6). 表示并列关系: and, as well as, also…

7). 表示总结性: in general, in a word, in short, on the whole, to sum up, in brief, to conclude

接下来是替换篇，让一些常用的单词换种酷形式！牛人都必会的，坚决不做土人！

1．occur 替换 think of

Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house. →

An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.

It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.

2．devote替换spend

He spends all his spare time in reading. →

He devotes all his spare time to reading.

3．seek替换want / look for

They sought ( wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees.