常回家看看的英语作文4篇(2)

Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.

伴随我们成长，长辈们在不经意间老去。一曲《时间都去哪儿了》戳中了所有人的泪点，引起很多人的共鸣。相信你也会有些感触。请以此为话题写一篇短文：

内容：1. 你和一位长辈之间发生的一件事

2. 你的感触和反思

注意：1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域; 2.短文词数120词左右;

3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯;4.书写清晰、工整;

5.不能出现真实的姓名和学校名

【答案】

One possible version:

The song Where Has the Time Gone moved many people, which also brought me back to an unforgettable incident between my grandpa and me.

When I was 13, my parent worked in Guangdong Province and I was take care of by my grandpa. I got addicted to computer games because of loneliness and learning-weariness. My parents were disappointed and angry, forcing me to drop out. But Grandpa said no. He decided to accompany me to school and waited for me outside till the end of class everyday. Until one day he was seriously ill, I was touched and felt guilty.

He used his own way to get me back from the wrong way. Now he is getting older and older. I can’t afford to buy him expensive gifts now, but I can help him with the housework. What’s more, I am determined to work harder to make him feel proud of me in the future.

【解析】

【技巧点拨】

1.主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；

2.一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；

3.恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；

4.注意卷面整洁，书写标准。

河南省洛阳高中2014届高三备考中原名校联考英语

【题文】书面表达（满分25分）

假设你是李平，刚被美国Brown University录取，你的笔友Peter来信祝贺，请你用英文给他写一封回信，告诉他你将于2014年4月19日到达美国，希望他能到机场接你并帮你找一住所。住所需包含以下信息：

※骑车大约30分钟可到达学校；

※房间宽敞，明亮；设施齐全；

※允许自己做饭；

※房东能讲地道的英语，健谈，好客。

注意：1、词数100左右

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

Thank you for your congratulations on my admission to Brown University! *****************************************************************************

Yours,

Li Ping

【答案】书面表达：

Dear Peter,

Thank you for your congratulations on my admission to Brown University!

I'll arrive in America on April 19th, and I'm wondering whether you can help find an apartment for me. Preferably, the location is near the campus, which makes it possible for me to go to the university by bike within thirty minutes. What’s more, I would like one apartment well furnished, spacious and bright, with a kitchen attached. If possible, I can cook myself. It will be better if the host can speak fluent English. Please let me know as soon as you find a suitable one. Besides, if it is convenient to you, would you please pick me up when I get to the station?

Thanks!

Yours，Li Ping