改正下面句子中的错误。每句有且仅有一处错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在原句中缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）；在该句右边横线上写出应增加的词。

删除: 在原句中把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；在该句右边横线上写出应删除的词，并且也用斜线（\）划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线；在该句右边横线上写出改正后的词。

例如：

增加I will pay attention∧this problem next time. to Because Linda studied very hard, so she ranked first in th

删除

1、I want to make a good first impress.

2、I couldn’t concentrate in the experiment.

3、Obvious, I was unhappy, but I won’t quit.

4、It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attract to computer games

and the online world.

5、Actually, I've just finished the travel arrangement.

6、Once I started thinking about fitness other than weight, things began to change.

7、Two thirds of people who lived there were dead or injured.

8、Despite of his cries, no one came to his assistance.

9、Go from junior high school to senior high school is a really big challenge

10、She is the girl who brother is studying abroad.

第二节书面表达（满分15分）

假如你是李华, Jane 是美国人。在她暑假来中国游玩时你们相识, 并成为好朋友。Jane回国后, 你很想念她, 于是给她写了一封信, 并且从三个方面和她谈了你对高一新生活的感受。

1. 对学校的印象;

2. 对老师同学的感觉;

3. 对新生活的决心。

2. 词数：100左右