步骤2.围绕图片主语列出所有的细节并添加到句子当中，包括：

1.找出可以修饰主语的形容词（单个的放在主语前边）A small oil lamp is flickering.

2.找出主语的同位语后加定语从句 （主语后）A small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light , is flickering.

3.找出可以修饰主语的介词短语 （主语后边）A small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering.

4.找出主语发出的其它动作，做成伴随状语，放在主语前做导入Standing lonely but full of confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering.

步骤3 围绕谓语展开细节并添加到句子当中，包括：

1.找出可修饰动作的副词，放在谓语后Standing lonely but full of confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly.

2.看看动作发生的时间和地点可不可以用介词短语来做，放谓语及副词的后边，地点在前，时间在后Standing lonely but full of

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confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the time.

3.看看句子谓语动作造成什么结果或意义没有，如果有，做成后置的伴随状语Standing lonely but full of confidence , a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the time，bringing brightness to everything around it.

4.如果谓语动作没有造成什么结果或意义，看看有没有其它的主谓结构可以做成独立主或伴随状语，来把谓语动作细节化。

confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the time.

3.看看句子谓语动作造成什么结果或意义没有，如果有，做成后置的伴随状语Standing lonely but full of confidence , a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the time，bringing brightness to everything around it.

4.如果谓语动作没有造成什么结果或意义，看看有没有其它的主谓结构可以做成独立主或伴随状语，来把谓语动作细节化。

步骤4 如果谓语后有宾语，再按主语扩展模式略作处理（加前后定语，尽量短）

最终版本：Standing lonely but full of confidence , a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the time，bringing brightness to everything around it. （37字） 大家再看一个例子，进一步熟悉一下以上四个步骤 中外文化的融合图片描述

1. An American girl appears pleasant.

2. A beautiful young American girl appears pleasant.

3. A beautiful young American girl, an international student, appears pleasant.

4. A beautiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed in traditional Chinese costume, appears pleasant.

5. Standing under a tree, a beautiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed