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为迎接高考，你常常复习功课到深夜。 请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。

注意：1、日记须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增 加细节，使日记连贯。2、词数：120以上。 3、日期已给出。 Sunday,October 13,2003 Fine

1、审 题 、 ①体裁：日记文体。 ②主要时态：一般过去时，描述 我 一天上 午的经历。 ③人称：第一人称 ④要点：记叙描绘文体，抓住四个要点： 时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过。 ⑤注意日记的格式。

2、简译 为迎接高考，“我”常常复习功课到深夜。

I often stay up late to go over my lessons for college entrance examination. .

I woke up at nine o’clock this morning .

I got dressed. I rushed into the living room . Mother was preparing breakfast there .

I got on my bike .

When I got to the school,I found the schoolgate was closed

3、衔接 将图中和图与图之间隐藏的要点挖掘出 来。 对第一幅图所反应的内容我们要交待其 原因：如：昨天晚上直到12点才睡觉。 Last night I didn’t go to bed until 12 O’ clock. .

对第二幅图我们要根据常识补出：(起 对第二幅图我们要根据常识补出： 来后)要洗漱： 来后)要洗漱： I brushed my teeth and washed my face quickly.

对于第二和第三幅图之间我们也应该根 据常识补出下列要点： 图中的母亲有没有讲什么？(因为时间 紧张，母亲没有来得及讲什么) 我去上学肯定要拿什么？(书包) Before she could say anything,I got my anything, school-bag…

对于第三幅图，我们可以相象一下： “我”骑车往学校赶的路上的心情 害怕迟到受处罚，而拼命地骑车 I was afraid that I would be punished by the teacher because of be late so I rode as fast as I could. 对于第四幅图我们可以推测：因为车骑 得快，因而心理感到好象没过几分钟就 到了学校. It seemed only a few minutes before l got to the school.

4、成文 加上过渡词语、改变一些句式，整理成文。

Sunday,October 13,2003 Fine I often stay up late to go over my lessons or college entrance examination.It was . not until 12 o’clock last night that I went to bed.When I woke up this morning,I found it was already 9 o’clock.I got dressed,brushed my teeth and washed my face quickly.

Then I rushed into the living-room,where , Mother was preparing breakfast.Before . she could say anything,I got my school, bag,ran out and got on my bike.I was , . afraid that I would be punished by the teacher because of be late so I rode as fast as I could.It seemed only a few minutes before I got to the school .To my surprise,I found the schoolgate was ,

closed.I t was then that I realized it was . Sunday. .

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